Dolby

Maddie, I can't check your pitch unfortunately but I have had a look at the other posts. I think you needd to annotate in a bit more detail- particularly house style, colour and the images used- shot types and composition etc. Use the codes and conventions sheet to guide you as to what to analyse. The main area that you also need to add to is the industry research and audeinmce feednbck for the RMA and your ideas- the more feedback from your target audience the better; reflect on this to inform your decisions.