Maddie- the presentation of question 4 is great and the audience profile is a nice touch. Question 5 needs work- the comments only focus on the front cover and are a little vague- consider how the content of the magazine appeals to your audience- the coverlines and the price and maybe the house style. Look at the audience research you did at all stages and how this fed into your understanding of how to appeal to them.
Maddie- the presentation of question 4 is great and the audience profile is a nice touch. Question 5 needs work- the comments only focus on the front cover and are a little vague- consider how the content of the magazine appeals to your audience- the coverlines and the price and maybe the house style. Look at the audience research you did at all stages and how this fed into your understanding of how to appeal to them.
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